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The demon's prayer.
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The demon's prayer.
A poem I wrote for my combined lit/history/theology/philosophy class. It's pretty much my idea of a prayer to Satan.
When I awake the sleeping giant,
When I stare down the world, defiant,
When I unleash the lethal beast,
When I unveil the poisoned feast,
When I release the hidden fire,
When I collapse the castle spire,
When I destroy the depths of dreams,
When I find out what dying means,
When I discover worthless gain,
When pestilence will fall like rain,
When once again the world will die,
When with our sorrows, God will cry,
When leaders join the black parade,
When Satan leads the Lord’s crusade,
When thirst is quenched with cutting ice,
When golden death shall man entice,
When twice and once ourselves have warned,
When twice and once ourselves have mourned,
When sacred death brings sweet relief,
When shattered souls bring no more grief,
When slumber comes like crashing waves,
When kings are no more strong than slaves,
When avarice shall men control,
When you say farewell to your soul,
When all these things have come to pass,
All my work is done at last.
When I awake the sleeping giant,
When I stare down the world, defiant,
When I unleash the lethal beast,
When I unveil the poisoned feast,
When I release the hidden fire,
When I collapse the castle spire,
When I destroy the depths of dreams,
When I find out what dying means,
When I discover worthless gain,
When pestilence will fall like rain,
When once again the world will die,
When with our sorrows, God will cry,
When leaders join the black parade,
When Satan leads the Lord’s crusade,
When thirst is quenched with cutting ice,
When golden death shall man entice,
When twice and once ourselves have warned,
When twice and once ourselves have mourned,
When sacred death brings sweet relief,
When shattered souls bring no more grief,
When slumber comes like crashing waves,
When kings are no more strong than slaves,
When avarice shall men control,
When you say farewell to your soul,
When all these things have come to pass,
All my work is done at last.
Last edited by mortified_penguin on Tue May 03, 2011 7:23 pm; edited 1 time in total
Re: The demon's prayer.
Pretty good. Pretty dark.
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Re: The demon's prayer.
Wow, that's really good, mp.
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Re: The demon's prayer.
Dude, that was like...amazing. I feel a bit that if the devil exsists, a tiny piece of my heart may have a little to pray for through this to the devil from a couple lines This poem is actually making me think hard about religion. Makes me feel sad and lonely. I don't know why, usually poems don't speak to me much, but this actually made my mood change drastically. I don't know why...
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Re: The demon's prayer.
Twisted, deep, inspiring, cautious, menacing.... other adjective. This is a damn well written poem.
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Re: The demon's prayer.
noice.. i hope i never have to write something that good..
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Re: The demon's prayer.
good. great. whatever.
Question: how long did it take you?
I actually read the entire thing. i like it a lot.
Question: how long did it take you?
I actually read the entire thing. i like it a lot.
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Re: The demon's prayer.
why would you write a prayer to satan? not religious just kinda confused.
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Re: The demon's prayer.
I didn't write it to Satan, it's just an idea of what one to him would look like.
Re: The demon's prayer.
Did you model it after the Greeks prayer to Hades and the centennial parties they held for him?
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Re: The demon's prayer.
wow thats really good.
you should try to get it published or something!
you should try to get it published or something!
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Re: The demon's prayer.
This is scary.
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Re: The demon's prayer.
ahah, i actually read it. thats pretty good.
i think it fits my view of satan well.
i think it fits my view of satan well.
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Re: The demon's prayer.
I'm saving this. Not for plagiarism, but for the memories
Really great; love it.
Really great; love it.
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Re: The demon's prayer.
Please dont bump topics..
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Re: The demon's prayer.
its only 6 days, i dont believe thats bumped..
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Re: The demon's prayer.
Shhhhhhhh..
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Re: The demon's prayer.
I FOUND PILLS AND ATE THEM
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